Tuesday, January 28, 2014

Yet another Rachel* with overlapping sensibilities. Read "How to Miss a Childhood" here at Hands Free Mama. It's from 2012, but sadly still relevant. 

This recent drawing of Wally's kinda prompted me to post Rachel's article.  








*(There was the Minimalist Mom, too.)

Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Out of Here

So, nearly two years after we "finished" our mom lit novel (we're calling it mom lit now; my agent friend Mike said chick lit has been dead for years) we are nearing the end a major round of rewrites based on some great advice from an editor at Hachette. And who knows, maybe two years from now we'll be finishing up another round of changes. These things take time, even light, entertaining fare like what used to pass for chick lit (no shopping in it, though, except for a brief trip to Whole Foods). 

This mom friend, co-writer of the novel, has a blog called Potatoes in the Mist. I went over there just now as part of my usual procrastination routine and found this haiku she wrote: 

I hate winter so
Snow, cold, frost, rain, and shivers
They dampen your soul

That reminded me of a haiku I wrote several winters years ago when I sent Alex out with a shopping list that left too much open to interpretation. One of the items on the list simply said "fruit". Before I knew that he had never heard of crudités and didn't know about different seasons for different kinds of produce, I thought he would know to get like bananas, oranges, apples, maybe pears. Instead he came back instead with rock-hard juiceless peaches. A huge bag of them. 

Peaches in winter,
Not very tasty. Warning:
Men should not buy fruit. 

Maybe instead of novels for the time-being I should stick with something doable, like haikus. Dream big novel dreams but stick with modest syllable counts-- 5-7-5. Meanwhile I do like winter. I love hibernating -- making tea, baking cookies, reading books, writing letters, and listening to the radio. (Although you learn right away once you have kids that you can't actually read with kids in the house. You can read to them, or let them read to you eventually. But you can't read Peter Carey's The Chemistry of Tears or anything else you have piled up in a ridiculous 5-year backlog to read. We have tried to get this thing SQUIRT off the ground, and idea from a Simple Living book - Super Quiet Uninterrupted Reading Time. We can do the last two but never the first three.) I love being outside in the cold, too. Snow, of course, but also the fierce gray freezing days. It's another thing that's hard with kids because you have to walk so much more slowly with them in tow. That makes the cold harder to bear. 

But I don't have to bear it now, I'm inside where it's cozy. We don't even need the heat, just our fleeces. Tea or hot chocolate. A rock-hard nectarine. The willingness to stay small, because if I'm not willing, I won't get anything done at all. I have to be willing to pick up the entire house and know I'll do it again tomorrow. To write one little piece of one scene and accept that the whole thing may get thrown out. To write one letter to Aunt Helen and not even have the energy to address it. I'll put a stamp on the envelope in the morning. Very small, but something.

And yet in the small details there is so much. Just in a word, or even tone of voice. I was re-reading my first entry to this blog recently and noticed a typo. I was describing the first two days of Wally's life and wrote that they were "the two of the best days" of mine. Which word was the mistake? The extra "the" or the word "of"? Two of the best days? That's what I think I must have meant. Or was a delusional, hallucinating, love-soaked, pain-wracked, feverish enough to say the two best

Something else, so very tiny. When someone says something and you don't hear them the "What?" you use to respond is subtly different from the "What?" you'd use if you did hear and you're just prompting for the next part of what they're going to say. Like if someone said, "Want to know what happens to Brody on the last episode of Homeland?" and you say "What?" meaning, yeah, I do want to know, what happens? Your voice is mainly flat but tilts slightly down. But if you didn't hear the question, you'd say "What?" with your voice going up, as is typical for a question. If the acoustics were bad or if there was a lot of background noise the second "What?" could be mistaken for the first, with catastrophic results if you hadn't yet seen the season finale of Homeland

Here is another. A friend who's brother is trans (was a girl as a child) was describing how her brother used to annoy her all the time when they were kids. She used to complain about him to her mom. "I would shout," she started to say, "Get..." but here she tripped up and couldn't get the pronoun in there. She was okay calling her once sister her brother. She had even adjusted to calling the historical person a boy and using the pronoun "him" when describing him, even thought she had known him as a girl. But to rewrite her own experience so much that she would change her own ancient words in the retelling, that was too much. To her mother decades earlier she had shouted, "Get her out of here". Get "her". The her that is gone. That's what she'd said then. Memory speaks. 

I've been thinking about these tiny things, a pronoun, a word here or there, a voice that's slightly raised or slightly turned down. I hang on this stuff, which is why I have to write. But in fiction, you don't write about it, you just let it seep into the scenes. 

The news is on behind me. I'll turn to it soon. Away from the virtual page, into the world, and soon to sleep. Another arctic front tomorrow. Light snow possible on Saturday. It's 10 degrees now in Point Pleasant, wherever that is. 




Friday, January 3, 2014

Nearer to Spring



My sister gave me six beautiful journals for Christmas yet here I am writing on the back page of the Southern Poetry Review. An old one, although strangely I cannot find the year, only the volume and issue (45 and 1). I suppose I could -- with a google search -- find out what year it was, but for now I'll be satisfied to know it was from at least 2002 as the front cover has a picture of birds in Central Park taken that year. 

It's New Year's Eve. I don't remember may New Year's Eves since having kids, though last year I do remember we were in Massachusetts. There was lots of snow. We went to a neighbor's party and had a Friendly's Jubilee Roll. I like to be absent during the crucial part of the event, to go to sleep before midnight. It just feels so comforting to me. Like a kid marched up to bed before all the real partying begins. Drifting off to sleep with the sound of muffled voices drifting up over the banister. Everything is okay. Other people are keeping watch.

When we were here as kids for New Year's Eve my grandmother Miriam would always set up these tray tables with snacks on them -- almonds, raisins (huge ones, I've never seen ones as big since -- she got them straight out of the vat at the "Farmer's Market" on 9th ave) and dried apricots. Lots of seltzer of course. She always bought us Chocolate ice cream pops, too. Really good ones; maybe Haagen Dazs, my sister would know. Dara always wanted to stay up but even back then I preferred to leave the show before the grand finale.

Later, once I moved to New York as an adult but before I had my own kids, on NYE there were parties, or bands playing, or me playing in bands. There were quiet nights, too, the friend who would occasionally throw a fashionable dinner party. As I got into my late 20s maybe there would be a guest at the party who looked distracted, kept checking her watch, had that weary, not quite present kind of presence and you'd find out later that they had kids at home. But mostly in the early years the parties or dinners were full of other people like me who had no intention of waking up before they were good and ready anytime soon. 

One year after those birds from the cover of the Southern Poetry Review Volume 45 Issue 1 flew in Central Park, I remember on New Year's Eve day I was working at InfoPro, a part-time job my brother-in-law got for me editing statistical reports. I don't know what data was being analyzed or who cared that it was, or if I did it's not coming back to me. I think my brother-in-law had already left the company but I was still there and one of the few people working on New Year's Eve. With part-time jobs you always end up working hours other people don't want to work. The afternoon felt so long and empty and disconnected with just me and one or two others poking around the office and feeling distracted because of what day it was. My plans weren't glamorous -- meeting my parents and grandmother for dinner at a Chinese restaurant in Chelsea. There was the vague possibility of a party in Williamsburg after. I liked to keep plans open even if I knew I wasn't likely to follow through on them. It felt like tricking time, not agreeing to only a limited number of hours before the end of the year. Yes, after dinner I can haul myself out in the cold to post-industrial Brooklyn for a party. And I can stay home and be cozy and in my pajamas, lights out by 11:30 as well. Not one or the other. Both. Until, at a certain point in the evening, after the cheap white wine buzz wore off and as my mom hailed a cab and grandmother took my dad's arm and started walking up 9th, I would have to fold and concede that it was one or the other, and the evening really did have an end point, and 2003, for that matter, did too. 

But I wasn't at that place where the two roads diverged, yet. I was just stepping into the warm tiny Chelsea Cottage restaurant, taking off my scarf and laying it over my jacket on the back of the chair. Scooping up duck sauce with those dry noodles Chinese places don't seem to serve anymore. I had never been to that restaurant, and was thrilled as the waiter came around with a big jug of free white wine. Thrilled with the edamame, the tofu curry and pineapple cashew fried rice. After dinner my mom was going to meet my sister to go see Alvin Ailey afterward. And I had that possible Williamsburg party. But otherwise nothing was pulling on us and we were just where we wanted to be, where all day really I'd wanted to be. It was cheerful and bright and the guy kept coming around with the big jug of free white wine and filling up our glasses, all but my grandmother's. She focused on the tea, which had to be served at 212 degrees Fahrenheit and not a degree under. After dinner we read our fortunes and eventually we did have to go. I didn't go to Williamsburg I don't think but I don't remember really the rest of the night. 

That was ten years ago tonight. Chelsea Cottage became our go-to place for years. Eventually they stopped giving out free wine and then a few years after my grandmother died it was bought by new owners who re-arranged the little room and changed the menu (no tofu curry). We haven't ordered it in a while. Every now and then we do, I do, remembering back to that first night, like a relationship that started out with so promise. You keep wanting it to work. It is so disappointing each time you decide to give it a try and have to remind yourself, no, no, it's just not good anymore. 



Jan 3
On the last day of last year, I went to bed before midnight, just barely, but still in time. Today we had a snow day. I typed in the pages from the journal. Hopefully my parents have received the car keys I mailed to them on New Year's Eve, the ones I accidentally pocketed and brought from Massachusetts. I can't wait to begin writing in the six new journals (six geese a layin') my sister got me. So many! So many blank pages. So many stories to tell. The holidays are over now; the tree will have to go to turn into mulch soon, the Santa Claus soaps packed away, less one risk the gaucheness of decorations in mid-January. The holiday cards too, will eventually come down. I'll save the photographs, recycle the rest.

A card came in the mail a week or so ago for my grandmother. "From All of Us at The Law Offices of Brian A. Raphan". On the front is the Manhattan skyline with fireworks over it and the words "Happy New Year". Wishing someone who died in 2008 a "happy, healthy and prosperous" 2014. Is it funny? Sad? Good fortune, to have to this message to her, as if from her, these five and a half years later? Is it somehow hopeful to wish her a happy new year? Like the birds circling on the front of that Southern Poetry Review, like the fragments of stories I jot down inside journals where my writing has never been printed. Are the birds that in winter remain behind supposed to be here, or have their migration patterns changed because of global warming? Are the ones that sing above us in the North on dark December days confused? Missing a signal? Yes we are nearer to spring than we were in September, but not that near. Should they be further south? Or maybe, just as likely, they are the ones that have always stayed, resilient, ready to fight, like Miriam venturing out on that cold December night at 88 years old, unafraid of cold or snow, able to endure.

















I heard a bird sing/In the dark of December/A magical thing/And sweet to remember./"We are nearer to Spring/Than we were in September,"/I heard a bird sing/In the dark of December.
Oliver Herford